I like the layered feel of text in yours, the different sizes of scrolling text in diff colors and speeds works well to that effect. toward the begining it is a little slow but picks up a good pacing. The last bit wen HAL is giving what is like his biography, is way fast, but thats an easy fix.
Your motions are smooth and you have some nice textures. I really like the part where u have the word mind repeated across, especially the top part where the line spacing is minimized making the letters overlap. At times, I felt overwhelmed, were you trying to create this overwhelming feeling? Some parts seem a little simple compared to some of your other scenes
I really like your type, speed, and quality of your piece. I enjoyed when things got too busy to read than became normal. Also, what you were saying was funny and interesting.
the text speed was good except for the main one in the middle that was too fast. The lights for the background, changing, made hard to focus in on the text. It was real confusing. It was interesting to look at if you were not reading anything.
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I like the layered feel of text in yours, the different sizes of scrolling text in diff colors and speeds works well to that effect. toward the begining it is a little slow but picks up a good pacing. The last bit wen HAL is giving what is like his biography, is way fast, but thats an easy fix.
Your motions are smooth and you have some nice textures. I really like the part where u have the word mind repeated across, especially the top part where the line spacing is minimized making the letters overlap. At times, I felt overwhelmed, were you trying to create this overwhelming feeling? Some parts seem a little simple compared to some of your other scenes
I really like your type, speed, and quality of your piece. I enjoyed when things got too busy to read than became normal. Also, what you were saying was funny and interesting.
the text speed was good except for the main one in the middle that was too fast. The lights for the background, changing, made hard to focus in on the text. It was real confusing. It was interesting to look at if you were not reading anything.
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